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  • Igzo-Zanghard

    I've decided to add my first non-quake story to my website's collection.

    This story was actually my final exam for an elective class I took on the Horror Genre. We had to write a paper/story based on our major. At the time I was still an Education major (I've switched to IT now), so mine is about a school in the middle of Nevada.

    I don't want to spoil anything if you're interested in reading it, but basically there are two versions of this story:

    The Original Version was my first attempt at the story. Nothing is left out of the story from what I wanted to include. Unfortunately, I wrote too much....about two pages too long for my exam's requirements.

    How that happened is that I didn't have the program already set on "double-spaced", so I just kept writing until I got to the 'required' amount of pages.

    So I e-mailed my professor and she said that I need to edit out enough to where it meets the requirement, and thus, the Final Version was created. In fact, those that read both say the edits make this version better of the two.

    And I did pass the class (I believe I made either an A or a B on the exam).

    Anyway, I've released my first horror story, Igzo-Zanghard as part of my Quake Story series. If you decide to read it, I hope you enjoy it.

    Original Version

    Final Version

  • #2
    I always thought bombs would be able to kill dinosaurs but NO...
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    • #3
      Hah well you already know that he's no ordinary dinosaur.

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      • #4
        Maybe they can hire a suicidal Iraqi to strap some uberbombs on and get eaten by the dinosaur. Then the dinosaur gets some serious heartburn.
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        • #5
          Im I the only one that read this? wtf
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          • #6
            Originally posted by the_f0qer
            Im I the only one that read this? wtf
            Pretty much. I never bothered to read people's fantasy stories.

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            • #7
              Bank > Reading

              For that matter

              Bank > Everything
              "It's called being awesome, maybe you should try it." -Bank

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              • #8
                I think Bank must have eaten one of those "madcow" hamburgers that you hear about on the news.
                Quakeone.com - Being exactly one-half good and one-half evil has advantages. When a portal opens to the antimatter universe, my opposite is just me with a goatee.

                So while you guys all have to fight your anti-matter counterparts, me and my evil twin will be drinking a beer laughing at you guys ...

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by Bank
                  Bank > Reading

                  For that matter

                  Bank > Everything
                  Jean-Luc > Bank
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