3rd Story Underway

[QuadRaptor]

Hey guys, I've been working on my third story, "Visitors", for a bit.



http://www.geocities.com/quadraptor/quakevstory.html

The storyline is this: A spacecraft lands on Earth, and the passengers are POWs from the Strogg Wars. However, when they land and come out of the ship, they've been built like Stroggs.

Some people begin to get suspicious of these newcomers, thinking they may not be legit and may actually be undercover Stroggs, while others believe that they are escaped prisoners of war who have been remodeled into the Strogg shape.

QuadRaptor reunites with a former clan-mate, Lt. DangerGirl, who has become an Iron Maiden (Quad supports the Stroggs because he feels he is just like them, since he became a cyborg after the Strogg Wars)....

But when a general decides the newcomers are to be executed, all hell basically breaks loose.

I won't spoil any more from there, but here's where YOU come in.

If you want a part in the story, take a side!

The Quake Marines - they are suspicious about the Stroggs and are ready to fight them in defense of the planet.

The Stroggs - (note, if you take their side, you're not a strogg, but a Quake Marine "strogg sympathizer") they truely believe they are prisoners of war and feel they are being mistreated. They will defend the truth they believe.

Undecided - Anyone who is not on either side or is partly on both sides.

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Quake Marines -
Canadian*Sniper
Phenom

Strogg Sympathizers -
QuadRaptor
GameFreak

Undecided -
Bank

I'd love to have some new people in my story before I continue it. And if you want to go a bit in depth as to what you want your character to support, I'll try to include it (for instance if someone on the Marines' side tries to talk Quad out of being a Sympathizer, ect.)

[QuadRaptor]

I know this topic was kinda shrugged off but I'm really serious about this. I really want to have some appearances from other quakers aside myself, but I have no idea where you would stand if you were in this story.

Someone please volunteer to be part of this story so I'm not just writing about myself. I really enjoy including other quakers in my stories.

[gamefreak]

im with the stroggs, and you could write something like this quad...

gamefreak stared at quad. he then smiled. well, if you believe in them, i said to quad, then i do too.

[Canadian*Sniper]

You can put me in your story and make fun of me however you want Just don't kill me off, I hate getting killed

[QuadRaptor]

Thanks.

GF, I'll make sure to include that.

C*S, I'll put you in the Quake Marines so there's at least one person there. Don't worry, I'm very respectful of how I portray other quakers. Did you ever get to read "The Summoning"? I gave you a really cool part where you were an awesome sharpshooter.

Of course, I wrote "The Summoning" before coming to QuakeOne....

[Canadian*Sniper]

link me, I havn't seen it nor would I be interested but I want to see my cameo

ps - I'm giving you permission to make fun of me!

[Bank]

I believe I should be President of the United States. And in contrast to Canadian*Sniper, please kill me off either near the middle of the story or the end. (I dont have to be president, I can even be a general, I really dont care. I just need a position where I can be snide and sarcastic like I actually am : D )

[QuadRaptor]

"Alright soldiers, we have some new additions to the team.", F1R3 said. Three more soldiers walked in at that time and joined the formation. The others recognized them immediately - Royal Assassin, Canadian Sniper, and Lord Ic3s. "Now, we've added these three because two of them are exceptionally well trained snipers, and the other is especially well trained in melee combat. I will also need two volunteers who are skilled with sniper rifles - you will be taken with these two snipers for your own briefing.", F1R3 said, continuing, "Anyone interested?" QuadRaptor raised his hand, as well as Sir Camps. "Good. You four go to the target ranges. I'll be there shortly. AS FOR THE REST OF YOU....", F1R3 yelled to get their attention once again, "Kermit will be going over your strategy."

Sir Camps, Quad, Royal Assassin, and Canadian Sniper left at the same time, followed shortly after by F1R3. Along the way, Canadian Sniper said to Quad, "Haven't seen you in a while. Where have you been?" "Working on my accuracy on Singed lately. I'm assuming you've still been testing X-Men and Gunter's cooperative simulation, 'Future Vs. Fantasy'?", Quad replied. "Yeah, FVF is still really fun...."

The Nameless City

Kermit, Catgirl, and Grim found themselves at the Nameless City. They began to move, noticing several ogres with bulletholes through the heart or forehead. As they continued down a hallway, they could hear the echoes of another quaker. They constantly heard, "HEADSHOT!!", and knew exactly who they had found. Continuing over a lava trap and up an elevator, they followed a hallway down, still seeing dead monsters, until they found the new quaker sniping HellKnights from a far distance. "Heheh....you're really loud for a Canadian Sniper.", Catgirl said. He turned around, "Oh it's you guys. I can handle this.", Canadian said with a smile. Kermit took a grappling hook and swung up to a hole in the wall, pressing a button to lower the elevator in the center of the room. The four of them jumped onto a ledge and then headed into a dark room.

The first quote was from Chapter One - Darkness Day
The second quote was from Chapter Five - The Elder World

[Canadian*Sniper]

Why am I so cool in your stories? I was expecting something like "OW I fell off this cliff and died! That was the last time we saw Canada Snipy Snap..."

woot

[Phenom]

Phenom wants in.

I'm a marine! FUCK THE STROGG! HOORAAH!

Real marines snort 2 lines of anthrax and ask for seconds!

[Bank]

Where's the Bank?

[QuadRaptor]

I wrote a bit more. Featured quakers in the section I just wrote include Canadian, Phenom, and GameFreak.

[Sajt]

Include me! I'm a fish on a chair with wheels scotch taped to it, and I grow a beard every night which has to be shaved off in the morning by my assistant.

[QuadRaptor]

I finished this story today.

[foq]

Quad, your stories keep getting better and better.