GAMEFREAK: A NINJA'S TALE the tourney of the multiverses!

[foq]

This is supposed to be a Quake story?? Or no??
Anyways before actually reading it (I haven't yet) I find that you've copied off something. Although you call it a ninja spirit, I believe Shaman King came up with having "spirits" floting about you that help people fight. You even copied the name. Heh.
edit: I see it is a Quake story, but you copied alot off Shaman King, heh.
P.S. ... Shub wasnt much of a tough boss that you would expect. I ahould make a thread about that.

[Bank]

well, sorry it's not too interesting for you bank, i'm not much of a writer ^_^;
the only reason i write my stories is for fun, and of course, you guys, my audience ^_^

It's Bank, and writing can be great fun without being uninteresting. But, everybody's got to start somewhere.

[gamefreak]

This is supposed to be a Quake story?? Or no??
Anyways before actually reading it (I haven't yet) I find that you've copied off something. Although you call it a ninja spirit, I believe Shaman King came up with having "spirits" floting about you that help people fight. You even copied the name. Heh.

ummm, not really, amidamaro, my ninja spirit, doesn't help me fight, he's sorta my sensei and teaches me techniques and stuff. and i guess shamen king has the word "spirit" copyrighted or something, right?

[foq]

No, it was just thier idea. But I will be following your stoey, though. Doesn't make me not want to read it.

[gamefreak]

ah, i'm just joking around with you foq, you figured it out, i did infact copy shamen king ^_^ (only that little spirit part)

[foq]

And the tourney part, maybe not from Shaman King, but from somewhere
Yeah, it's definately alot better. I may try making one, rewriting my previous story.

[gamefreak]

your right about that too foq! I got almost this WHOLE tourney thing from that new teenage mutant ninja turtles series. that's also where i got " the great dashio"

[foq]

You copied alot.
edit: you also copied shubby off Quake. ROFL

[gamefreak]

that's something i'll NEVER do again! (WARNING TO EVERYONE! DO NOT COPY SHUBBY OFF OF QUAKE!) (ESPECIALLY IF YOUR WRITING A QUAKE STORY!)

[Bank]

Wait...what?

Writing stories in game/movie/show universes is ok, but stealing ideas = muy uncaliente : (

[gamefreak]

sorry, that's just how i write Bank. i take a main source, other wise, this TV show, and work off of it. sorry...

[foq]

I was just being stupid. Know how we include Quake people in Quake stories? We copied off them. ROFL

[gamefreak]

I woke up, startled. Not THAT dream again, I thought to my self. The others weren�t awake, so I walked around the silent ship. I got to the big room where we first met the dashio, and no one was there. I sensed something then. It was coming close, whatever it was. I reached for the rune blade, but I decided it was probably just someone walking around too.

Just my luck, the �thing� walking around�was that alien I bumped into last night. He noticed me as soon as he saw my face, and he hissed, loudly. �Look, I don�t want to hurt you,� I said, trying to reason with it. It hissed again, and then leaped towards me. I smiled, then teleported. I had teleported behind him, tapped his shoulder, and teleported behind him again when he turned.

It turned around and we stared each other in the eyes. It opened it�s mouth, and spit some kind of venom at me. I tried to dodge it, but I wasn�t quick enough. I rubbed my eyes. �It burns so much,� I nearly shouted. I got up. Now�I was pissed. I couldn�t see him, but I could sense him! He leaped at me, and I jumped, high in the air. I got out the rune blade and struck him; he let out a giant hiss, and then ran fast away.

�You are good,� the dashio said,� I�ve been watching you, and that was impressive.� �Dashio�he got my eyes, I can�t see,� I said. Wait, I am so stupid, I thought. I used the healing jutsu, and rubbed my eyes with my healing fingers. The venom didn�t go away. �I can help with that,� the dashio said. He took his magic staff and pointed it at me, and shot me with some kind of magic spell.

I opened my eyes, I could see again! I bowed down to the dashio, and said,� thank you.� �It is no trouble, and I also banished that alien that attacked you, back to it�s planet,� he said, smiling. He walked me back to my room, and I lied in the bed again. I couldn�t go back to sleep, I sensed evil. After hours of thinking, the ship seemed to stop.

The kids woke up; so did quad and Drago. I heard the dashio�s voice in my head. �Everyone report to the main room,� he said, in many different languages at once. I would tell the dashio of the evil I was sensing later. We walked down the hall into the big main room. I looked out a window and saw a giant, grey planet. �Everyone, it is time, THE TOURNEY OF THE MULTIVERSES,� the dashio said.

[gamefreak]

The dashio ordered each race to go into this white circle of light, where they were teleported to the ground of the planet. When it was our turn to go up, we all stepped up and wait. The dashio winked at me, and we teleported.

We landed in what seemed to be a market. We looked at the different races of aliens around us, which I couldn�t tell if they came from the huge ship above us, or if they already lived here. We walked around, and I looked ahead of us, up the road, and couldn�t believe what I saw.

Up ahead of us was a gigantic stadium, big enough to sit probably 1,000,000 people, or in this case, aliens. I pointed to the stadium, and the others looked. �Man, that�s big,� quadraptor said. I thought I heard someone gulp, but I think I imagined it. I looked at everyone and nodded. I dashed off to the stadium, everyone close behind. What an adventure this will be, I thought to myself.

When we got up to the stadium, we paused for a breath. Man, it was even bigger up close. It would take over a minute to fall off of this, and then hit the ground. We all walked inside and started walking through a long hall, filled with statues. We reached the end of the hall, and I turned to a familiar statue. My eyes widened, and amidamaro smiled when he saw the statue. It was a big statue of amidamaro himself. We walked on, and quad joked how HE was going to be the next statue.

The dashio came from the shadows. �welcome, I hope you all are ready,� the dashio said,� and please, allow me to introduce my son.� His son came from behind him. He wore a mask like the dashio, and he was about my age, and about as tall as me. �It is an honor to meet such a powerful and mighty ninja,� he said, bowing towards me. �Thank you,� I said, bowing back.

�Please, right this way,� the dashio said. We followed him to the opening at the end of hall. �Man, that is one BIG arena,� Archie said. I rubbed my eye for a second since it was irritating me. Archie was right, this arena was huge. It must have been the size of a couple football fields put together. �ah, do not worry,� the dashio said,� you do not have to fight there�yet.�

[gamefreak]

i wanna get everyone's opinion, ow is it so far?