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    Hey everyone, gamefreak here. Here�s my second quake story, but before you start reading it, you should read my first story at www.net-tyme.com but only half of my first story is there. The other half is at http://totallyuseless.proboards61.com/index.cgi also, while your at the tu forums, be sure to read the guide I made for my story, it will help you understand both stories a lot better, trust me. Ok folks, sit back, relax, and enjoy the story�

    GAMEFREAK: A HERO�S TALE
    The after story�

    I still remember, of that horrible day, the day I had beaten shub-niggurath. It�s been quite a few years now, and by the way, I�m gamefreak. Many Quakers thought living forever with the cloning machines was wrong, so they died naturally. Gunter, Quadraptor, Nyquil (my girlfriend), and me are all that�s left. Quadraptor IS a cyborg though, so he can live forever. Shub-niggurath�s army surrendered to us, and now they live in that little town, rebuilding civilization. It can get pretty boring on the planet of quake, but Gunter comes up with some of the coolest inventions. I spend most of my time training, oh, and I guess I forgot to mention I�m a ninja. I also have 2 friends that aren�t Quakers. Drago, a scrag that helped me in my previous adventure, and amidamaro, the spirit of the ninja rune given to me. I�m now 16, Nyquil is 17, Gunter is 42, and Quadraptor�s human self is 35. Well, here it is�the after story�
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    One day, I was coming back to the army base from training. I walked in, sweating, and was greeted by my girlfriend, Nyquil. I kissed her, and then said, what sup baby? Ummmm, Josh, I have something to tell you, she said to me. What is it, I asked her. I looked her dead in the eyes, whatever it was she wanted to tell me, it was serious. Josh�I�m pregnant, she said to me slowly. I was stunned. That�s�great, I stuttered. She smiled and gave me a hug. Gunter also made a machine that speeds up the rate of when the babies develop, said Nyquil, so their coming out now. We walked to the medical center in the army base, and I waited by the door for about an hour. Gunter popped his head through the door, come on in Gamefreak, he said, smiling. I stepped inside the medical center, seeing Nyquil holding not 1 or 2 babies, but four! Tears started swelling in my eyes. You two must have been very busy, Gunter said playfully. Nyquil laughed, and I gave Gunter a playful punch. The four babies we�re quiet, all except one. Wow, 2 girls, 2 boys, I said. Yeah, said Gunter, talk about lucky. We need to name them, Nyquil told me. I walked over to the 2 girls she was holding. Amy, and Christy, I said smiling. Amy always sounded good to me, and Christy was always my favorite dead or alive character. I walked over to my 2 boys. The loud one, I said, let�s call him Archie, and the quieter one�jay. Gunter smiled. I�m working on an invention that can make them older, that is, if you want them to. Sure, I said, you up for it Nyquil, I asked her? I am if you are, she told me. Give me about a day to finish it; I�ll work as fast as I can. Nyquil, I�ll be right back, I told her. Archie was still crying when I left the room while the 3 others were quiet. I went outside and saw amidamaro and Drago chatting with each other. Drago, amidamaro, you have to come see, I said! I dashed off into the base with my quick, ninja speed. I beat them to the medical room. They walked in, and saw the babies. Amidamaro smiled, you DO know why these 3 are quiet, don�t you, he said, pointing to the 3 quiet babies. No, why are they, I asked? Their, well, ninja�s, he said. What, I exclaimed!!! Their ninjas, how, I asked him, excited? Well, the four runes fused inside of you when you beat shub-niggurath with the rune blade. One rune stayed with you, along with the actual ninja rune. The other 3 elemental runes, now blessed by the ninja rune, were fused into your 3 babies. This loud one, he said, will probably have SOME ninja traits, but not all of them. Nyquil was surprised. And all that�s true amidamaro, I asked him? Yup, he said. Gunter walked in, good news guys, my machine to make your babies grow older was just missing a part, and I found it, so I�m going to fire it up. He turned on the machine, which was shaped like an arch. He threw a heavy rock through the arch, and on the other side, sand came out. See, he said, wind would cause this rock to break down into sand. He tossed a baby fiend he had found somewhere into it, and it became adult. (Oh yeah, speaking of fiends, I had a pet one, but it died a few years ago, his name was Joe) ok, lets do this, I said. He put on some weird looking gloves. I don�t want me hands to look like their 80 years old, he said smiling. He grabbed one of the babies, and pushed it though the glowing arch onto the other side, where I caught it. Uh, Gunter, I said, the baby still looks normal. Give it awhile, he said, humans are very complex. He pushed the other 3 babies through the arch. Ok, now let�s go to the bedroom and lay them down, Gunter said. We laid them down in one bed, and Archie, who was crying, stopped. I sat in a big armchair next to them, and watched almost all night, but I think I fell asleep�
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    • #3
      Hey day, wake up, someone said. I slowly opened my eyes, I was tired. Nyquil, I said slowly? Whose Nyquil, they asked? I opened my eyes wide. I practically jumped out of my chair. I ran as fast as I could to find Gunter. Gunter, it worked, I said! Of course it worked, he said, I also upgraded the machine so that, in all four of your children�s mind, there�s a virtual dictionary that knows every word known to man. Also, Amidamaro was right, while your children were asleep; I took DNA samples from their blood. 3 of them have ninja blood, and one doesn�t, though, he still has some ninja traits. My now grown up kids had caught up with me. I stared at them. Follow me, I said. I walked back to the bedroom where Nyquil was sleeping. Nyquil, I said, shaking her, Nyquil wake up! She opened her eyes. What is it, she asked, I�m very tired. Look at our kids, I told her! She instantly got up. We looked at all our kids. There were 3 ninja-looking ones, and then one that didn�t look anything like a ninja. I walked up to them, starting with Archie. Archie, Amy, Christy, and Jay, I said, going down through them like a line. So, what do you want to do, Amy asked? Amidamaro walked in. Hello master josh, can I talk to you for a minute, he said, looking behind me at my children. In private, he added. Who is he dad, Archie asked? A good friend of mine, his name is Amidamaro, I told all of them. Just sit here and talk with your mom. They all said ok and smiled, except for Jay. I sorta felt sorry for Jay, he was the only son that was a ninja, and Archie was a regular human, but with some ninja traits. I walked out of the room. So whatsup, I asked amidamaro? I was waiting for something like this to happen, he said. He continued, there is this sort of tournament that comes around every few years. And next year, it just so happens to be coming back. So, you�re saying you want me to join, I asked him? No, just listen, he said. In the tourney, they pick different races from different universes and that�s why the tourney is called, battle of the multiverses. The tourney picks 5 people from the race and brings them to where the tourney is held. We must stand at a certain spot on the ground if we want to be picked up by the tourney, he said. And I want you and your kids to go, he finished, but, you have a whole year to train them. Ok, I accept the challenge, I said. Amidamaro started walking away, when I shouted, were you in it? Yes, I was, he said smiling, I won it too. I walked back into the bedroom and saw the kids doing what I told them to, talk with their mom. I walked up to all four of them, you guys have to start training, I said. Why, Christy asked? Because, your going to be in the big tourney with me next year. I explained everything Amidamaro told me to the kids and Nyquil. Sounds good to me, Jay said, finally speaking some words. Yeah, I�m in too, Archie said. Count me in, said Amy. Heck, I�m in it too, Christy said. Come on, let�s go, I said, we have to start training. I ran out the door, the kids right behind me. This tournament was going to be big, and I wanted my kids to be ready for it�
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      • #4
        What happened to the quotation mark? And paragraphs? I'm sorry, it's just incredibly hard to read.
        "It's called being awesome, maybe you should try it." -Bank

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        • #5
          Amidamaro followed us as I went to the field that I always train at. I kept my mind on Archie, how was he going to train? He�s not a ninja. Then, I thought of his name��Archie� then it hit me. You guys stay here, I said, I�ll be right back. I dashed off to the army base and looked for the bow and arrows I had found some year. I found them and took a target with to shoot at. Hey, Gamefreak, said Gunter, I can modify those arrows and bow. Not right now, but yes, later, I told him. I dashed off. Here Archie, I said, giving him the bow and the quiver that held the arrows. I set up the target, and Archie immediately picked up the bow, nocked an arrow, and shot it, making a bullsye. Holy�I started to say. I walked over to him. Do that again, I said. He did the same process and hit a bullsye. Keep practicing, I said. I walked over to my 3 other kids. I remember how amidamaro taught me everything, so I was going to copy the whole process. Amidamaro watched closely. Ok, first of all, I have to teach you jutsu�s, I said. I sat down on the ground. Do what I do, I told them. They sat on the ground. Now focus your mind, focus your chi, I said slowly. I closed my eyes and focused my chi. I opened my eyes and saw the kids doing the same. After awhile of meditating, I got up, and so did they. I did a couple hand signals, and then shouted, FLAMING JUTSU. I shot fire bolts out of my hands into the sky. My kids stared at me. How�did you do that, dad, Amy asked? Do exactly as I did. The 3 children focused their chi and did the same hand signals. They shouted flaming jutsu at the same time. And small fire bolts came out from their hands, all towards me. I wanted to show the kids how good I was. I closed my eyes, sensing the flame bolts coming towards me. I used my index and middle finger and cut through all the flame bolts, but Jay wasn�t fooled, he shot more at me, just to see how good I was for real. I used my bushido sense (the ability to slow down time) and dodged all of them, and then I used a teleportation jutsu to teleport behind him. Pretty good huh, I told him? That was amazing dad, Amy said. Jay smiled for once, that was cool, he said. I slowed down time so that I could easily dodge those flame bolts, but I could have dodged them anyway without it, I said smiling. The next jutsu is the transformation jutsu, I said to them. I did a couple hand signals and then shouted TRANSFORMATION JUTSU. I tuned into Amy, then Christy, then jay. I want all of you to transform into me, I said. They focused their chi and shouted the jutsu name. They all transformed into me, but everyone�s looked a bit different. Jay�s was practically perfect, but he got the eye color wrong. This will be the last jutsu for now, I told them. I did the hang signals, and then shouted, HEALING JUTSU. I got out my sword and cut myself a little bit. I swiped my hand over the area that was damaged. The blood, pain, and cut disappeared. I smiled, your turn. They did the exact same thing I did, and then walked over. I handed them a knife, and they each cut me, and then swiped their hand over the area, healing it. I clapped, very good. I looked over to Archie, who had broken almost all the arrows because he kept making bullsye�s. We walked inside the base from a hard day of training. Gunter walked up to me, here ya go, VERY light-weight metal, and unbreakable, arrows. This bow has very sharp edges, and can be cut in half for 2 large daggers. The bow has an aiming system that helps with aiming, and the arrows fly back to the user, and back into the quiver. Also, I made this from the hook gun you had. He handed me a bow and the arrow he was talking about. I set the target up and shot the arrow, not making a perfect bullsye. I was surprised, there was a chain coming from the tip of the arrow, to the end of it. It was the hook chain. Now press the button, Gunter said. I press the button that was on the arrow, and it flung me to the target, where the tip was. Archie watched in happiness.
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          • #6
            Can I try out these cool arrows, Archie said, excited. Tomorrow, I told him. I got me and the kids something to eat then went to the bedroom. Amidamaro was there. If you�re looking for Nyquil, she went with Drago to the town for a walk, amidamaro said. Ok, I told him. I lay down in a bed, and my 4 kids did the same. I went to sleep. I�m coming for you, I heard a voice cackle, im coming for you and your friends. I woke up, sweating. I looked at my w.r.i.s.t. (it was a cool device, on my wrist, but the general that gave it to me didn�t tell me what w.r.i.s.t. meant) and it said, 6:00 A.M. I yawned and got out of bed. I looked over at my sleeping kids. Nyquil was sleeping on the same bed I was. Amidamaro doesn�t sleep, since he�s a spirit, and Drago sleeps in the town. I didn�t bother looking to see if Gunter was sleeping, he usually doesn�t. On my way to the kitchen, I saw him working on some invention he�s been working on for years. I got some stuff to eat then went outside. It was almost weird. There was a breeze, and we almost never get wind or rain on this planet. That�s probably why the whole planet is gray. The breeze stopped as soon as it started. I turned around and my four kids were there. We�re ready to train dad, Amy said. Ok, I said, but first we have to walk out to an open field. We walked out to the spot we trained yesterday. I looked at Archie, he had brought with him, the bow and arrows Gunter made. I took four bells out of my pocket. Do you see these four bells, I said to them. They nodded. Before lunch time, each of you must have a bell, I told them. I got out a book that I was reading lately. Jay laughed, this will be easy. I looked up from the book, you really think so, I asked? He dashed towards me, and I simply moved out of the way. Amy jumped in the air, I didn�t see her do it, but I sensed her. I walked a few steps away and she fell flat on the ground. Christy was doing some hand signals, but there was no telling what jutsu she would use. After all, I only taught them 3 jutsu�s. She shouted, teleportation jutsu! I widened my eyes, not for fact that she knew the jutsu, but if she teleports inside of someone, its instant death for them. She teleported right next to me, but I teleported away. Archie locked on to one of the bells with the bow�s targeting system. He shot a metal arrow, and it went it almost to fast for me to sense it. I quickly grabbed it, and threw it back at him. I saw Amy, Christy, and jay, focusing their chi. Whatever they were going to do, it was a teamwork thing. They did the hand signals, and then shouted, SHADOW CLONE JUTSU! How the heck do they know all these jutsu�s, I thought to myself, I only taught them 3�unless. They made 10 copies of themselves so in total, there were 33 of them 34 if you include Archie. The all surrounded me. They all leaped at meat once, and I jumped up, high in the air. Ow, that hurt, Amy said. I dropped the four bells on accident. They slowly started to fall to the ground. I made myself fall in a straight line, so that I would fall quicker, like a bullet. I reached for the bells, but I was getting to close to the ground.
            I used the flaming jutsu and shot flame bolts at the ground, slowing my fall. I looked up at my 4 kids; they were smiling and held the four bells up into my face. I smiled, quite impressive, but of course it was my fault you go the bells. If I never dropped them, you 4 would still be chasing me all over the place, I told them. Well, on to the next training, I said.
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            • #7
              Originally posted by Bank
              What happened to the quotation mark? And paragraphs? I'm sorry, it's just incredibly hard to read.
              That's good advice, GameFreak. I suggest you take it. I can't read it, I just cant. Too hard to read.
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