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I saw this story on your getcities page and clicked on it, yet nothing happened. Is it a broken link or simply a promo? Thanks~
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I've started to write it but I won't release it until it's completely finished, and I have a good reason why:
"Finest Hour" will be the last story in my series, although I will probably write more that happens before it. It is supposed to take place after D'Rouen's "Banished".
The story is that we find out the Stroggs have built a space station that is capable of firing a beam that can wipe out humanity. We didn't know about it's construction because the Stroggs have developed a state-of-the-art cloaking device that hid the station while it was being developed.
We have now discovered the station, and a team of Quake Marines are to be sent up to take it down....
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But there's a twist to this story. Inspired by R.L. Stine's Goosebumps series, this story will be written as a Choose Your Own Adventure.
You'll have a segment to read, and at the end of each segment, you will have choices, each one being a link to the next segment. Some choices are good ones, others are bad. In fact, you will really never know what you are supposed to do and what you should avoid, although you'll get an idea of which way you're going in the story.
But at the very end are two endings - a good and a bad. And what's on the line? Someone's life! That's right, get the good ending, and they'll be saved, but get the bad....and well, you'll see.
I don't plan to release this one piece by piece because I think that will ruin the fun of it being a choose your own adventure, so I plan to completely write it before I release it.
So be prepared....the Quake Marines' Finest Hour is at hand!
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Ah, so it was a promo. Be sure to give us a heads up when it's done. I think I'll know what path I'm choosing xDe|------------------------0---------------
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Well, let's see how you would start out....
QuadRaptor walks into a room and sees a bunch of people. He goes over to talk to....
Gunter
Pita
D'Rouen
GameFreak
Canadian Sniper
FatUglyBitch
CatGirl
Monster
Take your pick from one of those eight. Depending on who you pick will determine which path you begin on.Comment
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What about Bank, you better at least put a talking statue of me or have me stroggified : D
Pleeeeeeeeeaaasssee"It's called being awesome, maybe you should try it." -Bank
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Okay I checked Net-Tyme a sec and then came back and saw:
Quadraptor- Finest...
Today 04:05 PM
by Bank
And I was like, "The first words he's gonna say are, 'What about Bank'?"
Although I DO make a reference to you in one of the conversations with one of the players.Comment
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References arent good enough, I want my damn cameo!Originally posted by QuadRaptor"It's called being awesome, maybe you should try it." -Bank
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Well barking at me won't get you one
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He does a great job of making us shutup and wait..
That's a compliment btw!!
I still have D'Rouens story posted on my board.. So if you feel lost you can read it there as well as Raptors with a comment section. I'm happy to host both of these talented writers.
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Then I'll try screaming : DOriginally posted by QuadRaptorWell barking at me won't get you one"It's called being awesome, maybe you should try it." -Bank
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Gotta love (or for Pita, HATE) those cliffhangersHe does a great job of making us shutup and wait.. That's a compliment btw!!
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MAKE FUN OF ME DAMNIT!!!!Originally posted by QuadRaptorWell barking at me won't get you one
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rofl^^
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His wasn't much. We get into a conversation about video games.
Sniper's is my favorite so far. Of that list I've just got Monster left and I was trying to decide what he would want to talk about. I think I decided to have it be music-related or something.Comment
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I'm everybody's favouriteOriginally posted by QuadRaptor except for seighten. I'm not his/her favourite I think I'll survive though
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