New Doom story (I will keep you updated)

[RL Clown]

The Boss says, "It's about Debra... I have a lot of evidence to prove that Debra lied to us... She said that something fell on to her left leg. By the laws of physics, that would be impossible, unless if she was sitting down. But I remember seeing her; she was standing the whole time! A doctor carefully examined her wound and it looks as though Debra made the wound herself. The doctor thinks that Debra used a knife. Debra also mentioned that something fell on top of her head. But this is very strange, because when the doctor examined her head, he didn't see any wounds. He didn't see any bumps or bruises. In addition, Debra explained that she was lying on the floor; she wasn't aware of what was going on. But surprisingly, the monsters did not attack her. There is no doubt that the monsters did not eat her. Do you see where I'm going with this? I think that Debra is guilty. It was her intention to push the wrong button, therefore causing the monsters to go insane." Doom says, "Yikes! By the matrix! What are we going to do? How many people know about this?" The Boss responds, "Well, obviously, you and I know about this. The doctor knows about this. General Sanders knows about this and two police officers know about this. Look, I think that we should force Debra to take a lie detector test." Doom says, "But I just don't understand why Debra would do such a thing. She seems like a nice person (well, at least, that's what I thought)." The Boss says, "Me neither, I don't understand why she would do that. But I'm going to find out... Look, obviously, we like to blame monsters. But some human beings are guilty as well..."

[To be continued]

[RL Clown]

The Boss tells Flynn to continue hunting for the monsters. Additionally, he tells Flynn to pass the message on to Maria and the soldiers. The Boss says that he and the police forces will deal with Debra. Whenever there's an update on the Debra case, the Boss will inform Doom. After Doom hangs up the phone, he gives the news to Maria and the soldiers (the news about Debra). Maria is shocked to a tremendous degree. Maria mentions, "Why on earth would Debra do this!? What would be her personal gain!? I really don't think that Debra is a psycho." Soon afterwards, one of the soldiers says, "I apologize if this is a silly question, but why would human beings want to create monsters in the first place?" Doom tells the soldier that it's not a silly question; it is a very legitimate question... Several weeks ago, the lab signed a contract with the biggest banks in the nation... These banks stated that they needed some reinforcements. In the past, these banks have been robbed and the police officers didn't get to the scene of the crime on time. Doom mentions that this is not uncommon; let's be realistic... Many banks do get robbed. So why is this a big deal? Recently, the economy hasn't been performing well and the crime rate is going up (which means that more banks will be robbed (more frequently)). So the banks decided that they needed some 'extra body-guards'. The banks paid the lab large amounts of money. In return, these banks would receive some monsters. Originally, these monsters were supposed to do good things... They were supposed to guard the banks. They were supposed to use their super-natural powers to defend the banks against the robbers. No offense to police officers but police officers can only do so much... Many police officers are too busy arresting pimps, prostitutes, and drug dealers. In the meantime, who is going to look after the banks? The monsters are! (Well, at least, they were supposed to look after the banks.) The plan actually worked very well... The monsters were almost flawless, until Debra pushed the wrong button. The monsters became insane and now they're going after the human beings. Flynn mentions, "You know what really worries me? I don't think that Debra is the only one... Debra might have a partner in crime... At least one partner in crime. Don't laugh. This partner in crime could be here, right now!" Flynn looks around (there is a look of suspicion on his face). Suddenly, the MDD is beeping very loudly! 3 Arachnotrons are on their way! They're coming towards Doom, Maria, and the soldiers! Flynn, Maria, and the soldiers prepare themselves for another intense battle...

[To be continued]

[RL Clown]

Maria is severely injured; the Arachnotrons keep on attacking her left arm. The soldiers are injured to a large extent; the Arachnotrons blast the soldiers in the gut. Doom is shot in the chest and in the back. The Arachnotrons are trying to overwhelm Doom. Flynn sees that two Arachnotrons are standing under a balcony. He uses his rocket launcher to blast the balcony; the balcony falls on the Arachnotrons, squashing them. As for the remaining Arachnotron, Flynn uses his bare hands to give it a severe beating. Doom grabs the Arachnotron by one of its legs and slams it on to the ground ten times. Doom pokes one of its eyes, throws it on to the ground, and stomps it. The Arachnotrons are no longer alive. Flynn, Maria, and the soldiers need medical assistance immediately and they have run out of ammo. Maria uses her cell phone to send out an emergency message. As expected, the doctors arrive very quickly. One of the doctors is wearing a surgeon mask. This doctor tells Doom to close his eyes, because "it's part of the procedure." Doom follows the instruction. The doctor takes out a syringe and injects 'sleeping poison' into Doom's bloodstream.

[To be continued]

[RangerXT]

Well, it's getting better. Any continuations of the plot yet?

[RL Clown]

Doom is slowly starting to fall asleep. The doctor cries out, "Oh no! My patient is having a seizure! I need to get him into an ambulance right now!" The doctor puts Doom in an ambulance and drives off... When Flynn wakes up, he finds out that he's in a secret location and he's tied to a torturing device. The doctor takes off his surgeon mask and reveals that he is actually the ninja! The ninja asks Flynn in a threatening tone, "What is the activation code?" Flynn responds, "I don't know what you're talking about." The ninja tortures Doom and says, "Damn it! I'm talking about the activation code for the banks! I need to open the vaults of every major bank in the country. Now give me the friggin' activation code!" Doom responds, "Screw you. I'll never give you the code. I'm not afraid of you." The ninja tortures Doom even further. Surprisingly, a masked man wearing orange armor comes to Flynn's aid... He hits the ninja over the head with a hockey stick. The ninja is knocked out cold. The mysterious man handcuffs the ninja and ties him to a nearby pipeline. The mysterious man sets Doom free. Instantly after that, he takes off his mask and reveals that he is Phobos! He is actually Doom's brother! Doom is quickly shocked. He doesn't know what to say... He is extremely surprised and extremely grateful at the same time.

[To be continued]

PLEASE NOTE THAT IT'S BEEN A VERY BUSY WEEK FOR ME...

[MadGypsy]

What's up with this Ninja? There was no ninja in Doom. You can't knock out a ninja with a convenient hockey stick...lol. I mean, you can but, that makes your ninja a fake-ass ninja.

[RL Clown]

What's up with this Ninja? There was no ninja in Doom. You can't knock out a ninja with a convenient hockey stick...lol. I mean, you can but, that makes your ninja a fake-ass ninja.

Since I am the "director", I am allowed to change the plot. I think that everyone knows this, but movies that are based on video-games do not imitate the entire plot of video-games. If they did that, the movies would become very boring. It's common sense. MadGypsy, I see that you have done your homework. But sometimes I think that entertainment is more important than accuracy.

CONTINUATION OF STORY:

Phobos gives Doom a medical kit. Phobos and Doom take part in a very interesting and somewhat serious conversation... The following information has been learnt: The biggest banks in the country trust Doom with their hearts. They trust Flynn significantly because Flynn's military experience is exceptional. Few marines can compete with Doom; not many marines are in his league. Since these banks trusted Flynn to a large extent, they gave him the activation code. With the press of a few buttons on a computer, all of the vaults would open in every major bank (in the nation). This means that, theoretically, Flynn has access to all of the money stored inside the big banks. The banks saw Flynn as a back-up plan. If the monsters did not do a fantastic job at guarding the money (which is already the case, unfortunately), Doom would step in and assist the monsters. In other words, Doom would save the day. Furthermore, it is important to note that Debra and her husband work for a mob. Debra's husband is actually the ninja. The mob captures monsters and inserts computer chips into their flesh (Phobos knows this because he has spied on the mob for several weeks). Phobos works for the CIA. The mob use the computer chips to control the monsters. If the monsters refuse to obey a command, the mob would push a button on their cell phones or on their tablets. The button would send a powerful electrical current to the computer chips. As a result, the monsters would experience excruciating pain. What the mob is doing is very similar to human trafficking, but they're not selling human beings. They're selling monsters to gang members. Gang members sell drugs and prostitutes and it's all about survival of the fittest... Common sense will indicate that there will be some gang violence. Gangs will fight each other for control of various territories... Not only do these gangs have knives and machine-guns, now they actually have monsters! Doom is completely shocked by what he has learnt and it gets even worse... The mob is trying to move to Chile, where they will operate a monster-producing factory. They will sell monsters world-wide! But they need money to fund the factory... That's why the Ninja wanted to get his hands on the activation code (he wanted to use the banks' money to fund the factory). The mob has already designed a secret room under an airport (surprisingly, Doom and Phobos are actually in this room, right now!) The conversation between Doom and Phobos has come to a stop... Phobos whispers, "I hear some footsteps... The person is coming towards us. We should find a place to hide."

[To be continued]

[RL Clown]

Doom and Phobos hide behind a bench. Doom looks at the stranger and thinks to himself, "That guy looks like a robot. So from now on, I will refer to him as The Robot." The Robot looks around... In just a few seconds, he notices that the Ninja has been hand-cuffed and his body has been tied to a pipeline. The Robot yells out, "Oh no!" But instantly afterwards, Phobos grabs him by the mouth and restrains him by holding him against the wall. Phobos points a gun towards the head of The Robot. From far away, a voice cries out, "What is it!? What's wrong!?" Phobos commands The Robot to say that he saw a homeless cat. "Oh, it was nothing. It was just a homeless cat," replies The Robot. Doom gets a text from The Boss. The text asks whether or not Doom has seen Debra. The Boss can't find Debra; the Boss doesn't know where she is. Doom replies by text, "I'm in the middle of something really big. Right now, I can't talk much, but I will keep the connection for 60 seconds. By then, you will know my location. I don't know where Debra is but I have a feeling that she's not very far away... Anyways, please come as soon as possible and bring some soldiers with you." Phobos commands The Robot to take him to 'the big room'. Phobos commands The Robot to take him to the leader ('the big evil king'). Phobos gives Flynn a loaded rocket launcher. Phobos tells Flynn to follow along because he might need some back-up fire-power... The Robot, Phobos, and Flynn start walking...

[To be continued]

[ArrrCee]

Since I am the "director", I am allowed to change the plot. I think that everyone knows this, but movies that are based on video-games do not imitate the entire plot of video-games. If they did that, the movies would become very boring. It's common sense. MadGypsy, I see that you have done your homework. But sometimes I think that entertainment is more important than accuracy.

And on that note, I've yet to see any good movies based on video games.

[RL Clown]

Doom suspects that The Robot is leading him and Phobos into a trap... Doom is correct! That is the case! Three big guys from the mob walk towards Doom and Phobos. They prepare to attack Flynn and Phobos, but Flynn and Phobos use their kung fu moves to fight back. Flynn and Phobos are really good with martial arts and they manage to take down the three grown men in just a few seconds. The Robot uses his smart phone to call the mob leader. He sends out a desperate cry for help, but his plan actually back-fires! When he used his smart phone, Phobos was quick enough to see the location of the mob leader. Phobos runs up to The Robot and hits The Robot over the head with a hockey stick. Phobos tells Doom to follow him... They're going to take down the mob leader...

[To be continued]

[RL Clown]

Doom and Phobos enter the big room. They find the mob leader and Debra. The mob leader is Marc Gregory Thompson. Mr. Thompson and Debra are packing their bags; they're going to take a plane to Chile. Mr. Thompson speaks in an arrogant manner, saying that he has already won the war. He tells Doom and Phobos, "Oh yeah? You want to stop us? You want to arrest us? You're going to have to go through the Spiderdemon and the Cyberdemon!" The big monsters walk out and they prepare to attack Doom and Phobos. Flynn and Phobos look at each other in the eyes; they get the message... Phobos is going to take on the Spiderdemon. Flynn is going to take on the Cyberdemon. The strategy of Phobos is to use his quickness to make sure that the Spiderdemon becomes exhausted. The good news is the room is very big, therefore giving Phobos a lot of space to run around. There are also many lockers and benches, so Phobos can hide behind the lockers and the benches. He can use the lockers and benches as shields. The Spiderdemon uses its chaingun to open fire on Phobos. But Phobos ducks behind a bench. The Spiderdemon uses one of its legs to knock the bench away. Phobos is fast enough to move away, avoiding injury. There is a cat and mouse game between Phobos and the Spiderdemon. Phobos is the mouse and the Spiderdemon is the cat. Phobos keeps on hiding behind lockers and benches; the Spiderdemon keeps on knocking away lockers and benches. But the Spiderdemon is too slow; so far the Spiderdemon hasn't caused any major harm. The Spiderdemon can't really use its chaingun because Phobos keeps on running around in an unpredictable manner. The Spiderdemon is starting to become tired... Phobos blasts one of the Spiderdemon's legs with his rocket launcher. His method is shoot, shoot, hide, run, hide, shoot, shoot, hide, run, repeat... The method is working very well against the Spiderdemon, in spite of the fact that Phobos has suffered a few minor injuries. The Spiderdemon has managed to do a little bit of damage with its chaingun. Phobos is a human being and even he can become tired ( a little bit). Phobos sees a significant amount of blood flowing out of the Spiderdemon. Phobos uses his plasma gun to finish off the Spiderdemon. The Spiderdemon has just been fragged! Now it's Doom's turn... For the next match, we will see Doom vs. the Cyberdemon... This is kinda like a heavyweight boxing match... Stick around... We have some front-row seats for the showdown between Doom and the Cyberdemon...

[To be continued]

[RL Clown]

The Cyberdemon is about to blast Doom with its rocket launcher. Doom runs for cover; he hides behind some lockers. But the lockers don't really protect him; the rocket is too powerful. The rocket forces the lockers to fly, therefore, Doom goes flying as well! Doom crashes into a wall and the lockers slam into him, crushing him. Doom attempts to dodge the rockets but his method is not really effective. Although most of the rockets miss Doom, they still hit the lockers and the benches... There is some splash damage and Flynn is hurt from the splash damage. Flynn thinks that he has to increase his offensive intensity if he's going to win this fight... Flynn fires a rocket into the mid-section of the Cyberdemon. Doom fires another one into the left leg of the Cyberdemon. The Cyberdemon responds by blasting Doom in the right shoulder. The Cyberdemon runs up to Doom and punches Doom in the face. Doom falls down, landing close to a secret handle. He has a strange feeling that he should lift up the handle. After he lifts the handle, he sees a mysterious weapon. He reads the label on the weapon; it reads: 'BFG 9000'.

[To be continued]

[RangerXT]

And on that note, I've yet to see any good movies based on video games.

Lol, that was funny. I have to agree, the only reason people watch video game movies in the first place anymore is to pick apart on how it ISN'T like the video games. Honestly, if someone made a movie about the original quake, I would be hoping for a movie as close as possible to the video game. If it already works, why change it? There was no justifiable reason why the Doom film changed it from hell spawns to mutated zombie things, and over all it took away from it. I only like it for the FPS sequence. Hell, if the entire movie was like the FPS sequence, I would be A OK.

[RL Clown]

Doom fires the BFG... The Cyberdemon cries in pain. Unfortunately for Doom, he is standing too close to the Cyberdemon (so he is also injured by the splash damage). Doom moves away from the Cyberdemon and fires the BFG again. Again, Flynn feels hurt because of the splash damage (this time he's standing close to some lockers). But the Cyberdemon is the one who suffers the greatest damage. Flynn walks quickly and zig-zags across the room. Flynn fires the BFG, this time he doesn't suffer from any type of splash damage. The Cyberdemon expresses pain to a significant degree. Doom pulls the trigger one more time... The Cyberdemon's head comes flying off! The Cyberdemon has just been fragged! Soon afterwards, the Boss, the police forces, and the soldiers arrive. Doom, Phobos, the Boss, the police forces, and the soldiers stop the plane from taking off. They arrest Mr. Thompson, Debra, and the other mob members. The scene changes from the airport to a police interrogation room... Debra is sitting next to her lawyer. Three police officers are talking to them... Debra and her lawyer know that a lot of evidence is working against them. They can't really argue against the evidence. The police give her a special option... Her sentence would be reduced from 50 years to 35 years if she agrees to do the following things... First, she would have to admit that she's guilty. Second, she would have to explain how and why she committed the crime. Third, she would have to give the police forces the special code (the code to destroy all monsters). Debra agrees... Debra explains that when the other lab technicians were not looking, she secretly inserted computer chips into the flesh of the monsters. Yes, she and the mob had the power to control the monsters, but this was not good enough. The monsters were not crazy; some monsters still had some good values. Some monsters knew how to speak English; therefore they could communicate with the police. The monsters could talk to the police about Debra's sin. Therefore Debra had to make sure that the monsters went insane. If the monsters were crazy, they would not communicate with the police forces. This explains why Debra pushed the wrong button. She used a knife to fake the wound on her leg. Debra used a cherry bomb for the explosion. The monsters did not attack her because she had the ability to control them (since the computer chips were already inserted). Why did Debra commit the sin? She wanted some more money (She was greedy). Lastly, Debra gave the special code to the police forces. The police forces typed the code onto a computer. A hacker worked for the police forces and he gained access into a program... The hacker gave the program a virus and the program self-destructed. This caused the computer chips to self-destruct. This caused the hearts of the monsters to explode. That's it... All of the monsters have just been destroyed! Life has just returned to normal... Human beings do not need to worry about monsters any more... Doom and Phobos say good bye to each other... Phobos says that he'll go back to an old hobby, fishing! Doom says that he'll go on a vacation with his wife.

THE END