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  • Quake Story

    open-ended story, type what you like!
    You find yourself in a room. The first thing you notice is a gigantic START sign. You walk northeast, where you see a gib flying out of a pool of lava. You grab the gib. It's a bit hot. You then eat the gib. You bend down to take a drink of lava. As you cup your hands into it, you make a fantastic discovery. IT'S MOLTEN LAVA. Your hands are on fire...


    now, someone else write stuff
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  • #2
    Sweet Jesus, you should have listened to your grandfather when he said dont drink strange liquids, "especially when they're flaming coals from the pits of hell". You quickly blow out your hands and walk over to the start sign. It's a nice sign, with a large "S" on it, as well as some other letters. You step through the teleporter in the "Easy" hall.
    "It's called being awesome, maybe you should try it." -Bank

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    • #3
      you instantly teleport into another room. You are shocked and pass out falling backwards into the teleporter behind you. Now you're back where you started

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      • #4
        You make a running start into the easy teleporter. You manage to jump 10 feet through it, then fall from shock but you are now on the other side.
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        G|---------------2------2------0^2-------
        D|---------------2-------2--2-------------
        A|---------------0------------------------
        E|----------------------------------------

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        • #5
          The shock makes you faint backwards and fall back into the teleporter behind you. You're now back to where you started. You say "What the hell!?"

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          • #6
            Stress "YOU ARE NOW ON THE OTHER SIDE"
            Canadin, you are banned from this xD
            As you approach the west door (the others are sealed shut) you see a slipgate. You walk into it. By now you are used to traveling billions of lighht years per second, so the shock does NOT!! knock you over. You proceed forward, and notice a Grunt...
            e|------------------------0---------------
            B|---------------0^1----------------1----
            G|---------------2------2------0^2-------
            D|---------------2-------2--2-------------
            A|---------------0------------------------
            E|----------------------------------------

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            • #7
              Originally posted by the_f0qer
              Canadin, you are banned from this xD

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              • #8
                What is that retarded south park pic's purpose?
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                • #9
                  Originally posted by the_f0qer
                  What is that retarded south park pic's purpose?
                  my version of: xD

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                  • #10
                    Well your version of xD takes up too much bandwidth and it confuses people.
                    e|------------------------0---------------
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                    • #11
                      stfu and continue on with the story.

                      You now appear in a room full of lava and a very slippery edge.. huh? what's that? This isn't FvF? My bad :S

                      You now appear at the other side of your travels. You can hear the electronics making sketchy noises are you walk through the hall. After walking a bit, you come to a dead end. You see a pathway at a higher level in which you can't reach. You look to your left and see a strange wall. Walking towards it, the wall quickly opens. You are startelled not only by the surprise, but to see an ugly man with scars all over his body. The man sees you and charges with his shotgun, giving a loud ghey ROAR! You panic and flee back down the hallway and hide behind a pillar.

                      You can hear the grunt growling and coughing as it draws near looking for you. You quickly jump out and put him in a choke hold. The feeling of killing a man does not feel very settling. After taking care of the enemy, you take it's armor, helmet and shotgun.

                      You ponder about how the first area you were in was very medeval mixed with technology but now stand in a very clastophobic, futuristic tunnel. You walk back to the opening wall and stand near a button. You press the button with courage and the platform below you moves down like an elevator.

                      As the elevator is making its way down, you feel that this is only the beginning to a horrible hell...

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                      • #12
                        The elevator gets stuck. Outside, you hear a CLICK! then a BANG! A grunt's grenase blew open the wall of the elevator. Useing your shotgun as a sniper rifle you shoot the grunt 10 times. A rottweiler jumps through the hole and tries to bite you but you are it. It's alive but one of it's legs are badly injured. You hear another click and dive out of the hole, leaving the dog with the grenade. You are closer to this grunt and you cap him in the back as you jumped behind him. You take his ammo and then look at the elevator in ruins and realize that you can never return home. You decide to jump in the river and see where it leads. You hear a shotgun blast. It's another grunt. Useing the grenade you picked up from a grunt back at the elevator you explode him. A door then opens and 5 more grunts are looking at you. With no choice but to shoot them, you fire into the crowd with your shotgun. You are hit in the leg and torso, but you grab the grunt's grenade you just killed and throw it into the other grunts. 2 are flat on thier back but the rest are dead. You see a box resembeling a medical kit. You shoot the remaining grunts and open the medical kit. You find it full of natrual herbs, first aid spray, and a morphine needle. You use the first aid spray and the herbs but you save the morphine as you are feeling good as new already. A rottweiler approaches you, and you slice him with the morphine needle. Seeing more guards on the way, you take the grenades from the grunts you killed and throw one down where the grunts are and run for a slipgate you see...
                        e|------------------------0---------------
                        B|---------------0^1----------------1----
                        G|---------------2------2------0^2-------
                        D|---------------2-------2--2-------------
                        A|---------------0------------------------
                        E|----------------------------------------

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                        • #13
                          Lol it'd be funny if I said

                          "Then, a grunt jumped out from behind a corner shooting you, and you died."

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                          • #14
                            I was very tempted to make the player miss the jump to the HARD SKILL teleporter and die in the lava like the newb he is

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                            • #15
                              You walk out of the bloodbath and look at the open courtyard before you. Standing in the middle is Sir Bank, lord of Mediocracy. He gifts you with the shoes of wrath, which allow you to fly a grand total of three feet off the ground. And Water isnt ground.
                              "It's called being awesome, maybe you should try it." -Bank

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